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作文序列号 12990得分： 14.4 / 15分制
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标题： The ninth assignment
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Cars in the City
Cars, as a very significant way of transportation in today’s society, are introduced to more and more urban families year after year. It’s not uncommon of there being more than one car in a single medium-class family. The possession of a car is almost essential for every income earner, in order to satisfy the increasing need of moving more conveniently and efficiently around the city.
Either to go to school or go to work, going by car will certainly save a lot of time, besides being provided a rather comfortable space despite a terrible weather.
However, with the rising petrol price, cars are becoming a financial burden for their
owners, not to mention the cost of the car itself. Neglecting all this, the best advantage of cars is weakened with the unbearable long traffic jams that drive all of us crazy.
It is just one side of the problems that cars are causing. Instead of favoring a better transportation atmosphere, it is becoming the number one culpable for today’s traffic problems. Everything that’s too excessive is surely bad thing, so do cars. Too many cars create congestion, harming the traffic’s health.
Apart from that, the gases that a car discharges are usually harmful to the environment. The carbon dioxide, for example, contributes to the global warming, which leads to environmental crisis of more seriousness.
Therefore, actions should be taken in order to rid the problems that cars are causing. Fist of all, we should be fully aware of the consequences of owing a car. In fact, owing a car is like having a child. You have to be responsible for it. If you won’t use it very often, you’d better choose a public means of transportation rather than a personal vehicle.
Secondly, the government should provide more public transportations for citizens, such us
building rail-way lines, hiring more taxis, providing more buses, etc. In this way, people would be willing to use them, which are cheaper and convenient. If more people do this, there would be more free spaces in our cities, without the pressure of building more parking lots.
Last but not least, we need to protect our environment. Restoring its original state may be difficult, but if we plant more trees and buy less cars, I think the day when we’ll see a more beautiful world is not very far.
得分： 14.4 / 15分制
评语： Nobody is perfect but the language in your essay is pretty good. Your essay shows varied structure and wide range of vocabulary. Your essay shows that you are very knowledgeable about the topic. Congratulations.
您需要注意这些单词的拼写： transportations,
冰果英语智能作文系统提交的作文2作文序列号 12359得分： 14.8 / 15分制
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标题： The Eighth assignment
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Getting to know the World Outside the Campus
There’s an increasing necessity for college students to learn how to integrate themselves to the society in near future. Today when you enter a Chinese university, especially a well-known one, it gives you the impression that most students are mainly absorbed in their studies, leaving no time to explore the world outside the campus.
Whether or not this constitutes a mayor risk for their future career development is not the only worrisome issue. What is more alarming is the fact that some students are losing aspirations not only in studies but also in their future positions in society.
There is, fortunately, a wide range of ways for one to learn to integrate into the society. The public media for example, provides an explicit introduction for the individual to find out what everything happening everyday is about, and is also persuasive in the way that it encourages students make their minds to become part of the society from now on.
Another two ways to learn about the society are volunteering and social practice. Both of them can help the student get rid of his immaturity, and sign for a lighten experience of helping others. The minute the student join in such activities, he will get access to a wealth of knowledge about interpersonal relationships, something he would never become acquainted through textbooks.
Besides, the volunteering experiences will greatly change the judgment of the individual toward society. Because there is still a lot to be done, and every effort offered will be appreciated, the student will be more committed to serve the society in the future.
I think sometimes we students tend to overestimate our ability to integrate into society. The fact that our current lifestyles are relatively relaxed in comparison with our
high-school ones makes us more likely to be contented with what we already have, and forget the purpose we resolved to effort.
Therefore I think the first thing I should do is to take the matter of become part of society seriously. After all, there’s no how-to book that tells me the right way to get involved, but only that unique experience I'd create myself. The situation urges me to act so that I must waste no time to pick up all that knowledge through volunteering, social practice, the pubic media, daily communications with others, etc.
Only by being conscious of what we lack can we put the effort to make up for that debility, which in this case, is our insufficient connection with the society outside our campus. 得分： 14.8 / 15分制
评语： The language in your essay is effective, keep it up. You have a wide range of sentence structure and vocabulary. It's evident that you have covered the points required in your writing and showed strong writing skill. Congratulations.
您需要注意这些单词的拼写： debility,
冰果英语智能作文系统提交的作文3作文序列号 12991得分： 14.1 / 15分制
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标题： The tenth assignment
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My Suggestions to English Teachers
To begin with I think it necessary to make a small summary of the great deal of things that I’ve learnt during this semester. It can be divided into three parts according to the
respective courses. First of all, the English reading and writing course has greatly trained such skills of mine, the explanations given by the teacher was in explicit English, followed by numerous good examples of phrases. Apart from some exercises we’ve done on class, every student was required to complete an essay weekly, which furthermore improves our writing skills.
Personally, I think I’ve benefited most from the online course, which provides me with a platform on which I can fully practice my listening and reading, especially when I have to use logic and reason to do exercises and tests on it.
Besides, on the oral English class, I’ve been granted of a wonderful opportunity to make a presentation in public, a formal one which I’ve never tried before. It’s really exciting to deliver such a speech, which has been a very rewarding experience.
So here, I’d like to give some advice on each course so that they can better live to student’s academic expectations.
The listening class is really good; thanks to the modern facilities the school has given us. We always enjoy the English videos displayed before and after class, but I think if there were a resting time between class and class, the students would be more concentrated on the whole. In addition, if the records listened on class were played only once, in the same form of the CET exams, I believe we’d be better prepared for those tests.
The oral class is my favorite, so I hope there would be more interaction between student and teacher. It comes well if we can play some word games together, and we can communicate easier with each other.
As for the reading and writing class, I strongly suggest that the teacher could introduce us more English movies, as long as it does not conflicts with the requisites of the course.
That will add points to the whole impression of the class, as many students just lack sufficient attention and interest.
得分： 14.1 / 15分制
评语： Congratulations. Nobody is perfect but the language in your essay is pretty good. You've succeeded with flying colors in structure and vocabulary. Your essay shows that you are very knowledgeable about the topic.
