10天搞定托福写作

　　想要短时间内搞定托福写作要怎么做呢？下面小编给大家分享一些方法。

十天搞定托福作文

托福写作避免生搬硬套，要把学到的句式和词组灵活运用到自己的写作当中去!这样，写作的分数自然也就提高啦!

增加过渡段：

A1 好。。。

A1 好，而且 A2 好。(这个“而且”，可以用科技发展啊技术进步啊之类的扩充)

A2 好。。。

14 条万能理由：

与事物有关：效率、方便、经济、耐久、安全、空间。

与人有关：健康、乐趣、成就、性格、情感、交流、经验、他人。

理由的安排也要有逻辑顺序—首段要雕琢，要表现!

1、排比反问：

Have you ever been to the West Lake in Hangzhou City? Have you ever walked along the Long Corridor in the Summer Palace? Have you ever seen the red fallen leaves on the Fragrance Hill?

If you have never had such experiences, you would never know how much fun outdoor activities could bring you.

2、背景知识式：

With the development of science and technology, more and more companies (including international companies and small companies) are founded, but there are not enough People to

take these positions. So a large number of working opportunities are provided to people who are still teenager students.

In some countries, some people think if teenagers do a job while they are still studying in school, it may have a bad impact on their grade. Others consider that teenagers

should have jobs while they are still students. As far as Iam concerned, I agree with the latter.

Because teenagers can learn amount of useful experience through working and they think through the job they will acquire some knowledge of how to get a good relationship with others.

3、定义式：

Technology refers to skills, knowledge, and techniques thathuman beings use in their daily life and work. As everybodymay find, technology develops day by day. How does the development of technology affect our life?

Many people hold the opinion that it is due to the development of technology that human beings have access to the comfortable modern life. On the other hand, a number of people are always aware ofall kinds of destructive influence of the technological development on us. As far as I am concerned, the development of technology does far more good than harm to people’s happiness.

正文部分每段安排：

1~3 行 主题句

4~8 行 细节论述

1~2 行 主题再现

主题句的要求：

1、要有概括性：

Eg -. When I work in daytime, other people are also working, so I can work more efficiently.

Eg +. Outside environment during daytime helps to promote efficiency in many ways.

解说： TS 一定要概括， 不要写成反例那样那么细节， 不然后面的话不好展开了。

2、避免绝对化：

Eg -. Elder people are efficient.

Eg +. Compared with many un-experienced young people, most experienced elders can work more efficiently.

解说：正例表述得体，尺度很好，有限定成分“most”，有对比说法“compared with”等。

3、避免语法和用词错误。

细节论述部分：

1、个人事例推广到一般：(图书馆有钱该买书还是买电脑)

During the last semester, all the twenty students of my class are required to resort to the British Encyclopedia to complete our final paper.

However, there was only one set in the whole library because it takes a whole shelf to hold and is too expensive to purchase more than one set. Ever since the university bought in the CD version of the British Encyclopedia, we are free to refer to the same article at the same time through different terminals.

This case is not rare, in reality, frequently many readers of the library need to refer to the same source at the sametime.

2、反例：(still 图书馆)

Paper books in the library circulate very fast. Frequently we find a good book lose its good shape within 3 months. Those seldom-borrowed books are not safe at all, in danger ofnatural erosion and worm bites.

解说：不好说电脑好存放的时候，就说书不好存放。

举反例要适可而止，不能指望全篇用反例来支撑自己的观点。

3、具体数据和引用权威：

想得4分以上必须注意， 因为4分要求说服力，5分要求appropriateexamples。

hometown used to have one million acres of forests. The town people are shortsighted as to sell trees for $10 per piece. Trees are sold at a rate of approximately 100 thousand pieces per year, according to the data from the government.

Professor Selephant from Peking University, one of the bestuniversities in Environmental Engineering, once said, the tress in my hometown will disappear within 10 years at thisspeed of lumbering.

倒数第二段让步：

ttedly, books do have certain advantages over computers. They are easier to carry with, lower in unit price, and more energy efficient given that computers are driven by electrical power.

However, computers have more valuable merits as an efficient, durable, manageable means for libraries of the new century. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose computers as my final choice for the investment.

解说：让步之后一定记得重申 anyway 我还是坚持 X 观点。

　　五步帮你搞定托福高分作文

第一、巩固托福语法。

建议看赖世雄的“托福高分语法”;此书不长，可在10天年看完一遍。此书的功效是可让菜鸟在10天内领会必要的托福写作文法及阅读中遇到的文法问题，如长句子的分析。看完此书，你会认为自己的英语水平提高了一个阶梯，不仅仅是作文方面。

如果没有此书的，偶已经上传了，在最下面可以找到，但是不要着急，等看完了这篇文章再下载也不迟。

第二、加强托福单词的熟悉程度。

背托福单词建议用王玉梅的单词表(excel版)，其实，每个不同的单词表版本都不完美，比如大家背单词的进程不一样，对同一个单词的理解能力及熟悉程度不一致。建议自我完善下载下来的单词表。另外，有人认为，背完单词也就完了，该复习其他部分了，可以完全不用再背了。其实，偶不同意这个观点，根据人的遗忘规律，当时记得再牢的词语，过一段时间都会忘掉一些。复习IBT不是一天、两天或几个星期能搞得定的(除非牛人)，大家需要从一开始背单词一直支持到考试前一天，就算到后来一天看一点，也比不看强。

关于此表的用法：偶按照杨鹏记忆法的规定把王玉梅的词汇表分为21个lists，就在表里最前面一列。大家可以根据杨鹏记忆法结合玉梅词汇表操练。偶背了不到半个月已经背完，而且不易忘，非常有效!

前两点是基础。如果具备这两点的朋友，你们可以进入第二阶段的练习——熟悉范文。

第三、建议看托福高分范文。

有些人在看托福范文的时候太过于注重好词好句，反而忽略了ETS对学生最主要、最重要的要求就是文章结构及论点和论据好坏与否。ETS的考官不在乎你的观点是反对呢还是赞成，或prefer哪一个观点，他们所在乎的是你的文章结构清楚与否，包括观点是否明确，对比是否宣明;在乎你的论点是否支持你的观点，论据是否有力。

偶在此最主要的就是谈论文章结构及如何写好论点，展开论据。

第四、托福作文要观点明确逻辑性强

基于T 友们具有了丰富的词汇和语法的基础，写句子已经不是什么难事。但是，如何写好观点明确、逻辑性强及对比宣明的好文章，一是和个人知识及想象力的多少有关，例如，It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 你家附近将要建一个电影院。你同意还是反对，详细阐述支持你看法的原因。

有些基础知识欠缺或者想象力不丰富的朋友，只会想到——1，反对，为啥?太吵，人多;2，另一些人支持这个观点，为啥支持?方便，近。他们在几分钟能想到也就这么多了。如何提高想象能力呢?在短时间内我们也无法提高很多，但是我们可以用一些常规的思维去思考——连锁想象法。例如，如果反对此观点，电影院能让我们想到什么不好的地方?从修建开始想——破坏绿化，如果它建在咱们附近原来是草坪的地方呢?在施工的时候有很多噪音、污染环境等等问题;从建好后想——人来人往，太嘈杂，刚开张时，说不定有什么庆祝活动，人群拥挤，影响舍区的安静，还有很多很多大家都可以用这种连锁法想到。如果赞成的，方便，只需走路就可以看电影了;从走路又想到，节约路费及想到如果在上下班高峰期看电影的话，就可以避开人多的公共交通工具了。。。另外，有了电影院，除了可以看电影帮助消费者，另外可以有打工的机会，如卖票，小吃部工作——帮助学生补贴boards。这些观点不外乎就是关于环境、社会关系、交通、学生、经济等等。

第五、熟记托福范文

在每次练习写托福作文前，看几篇和你想写的命题相关的范文，记一些例子和句式;另外，注意看范文里论点和论据是如何展开，以及写作思维，对比一下你自己的写作思维。 在写的时候一定要卡时间，超过30分钟就不要写了，反过来再看范文，对比一下。如果你没有写完，没有关系，总结经验最重要，分析一下为什么没有写完，是因为单词拼写耽误时间了，还是想不出来论点如何展开。多数人犯的是第二个问题，这个一是需要时间练习，二可以根据偶提供的办法解决。

大家在审完题后(花2分钟想一下2-3个论点)，把想到的论点在电脑上列个提纲。先把第一段，最后一段写完，及第二、三或四段的首句写完——首句就是论点，每段的body都是围绕这几个点来。如此，既防止写不完的情况发生，又不会写偏题——因为你在写首句的时候已经检查了和主题一致与否。把整个框架打好(在此申明，这个不是托福模板，模板太死板，虽然有它的好处，但是模板不能fit每个不同的命题)，再来想论据去支持论点。 这一点就看个人的功底了。如果字数够了，没有犯过大的语法错误，无论文章内容丰富与否，至少不会低于20分了。　　托福作文字数最好控制在320-450之间，太多或低于300都不好。太多的话，除非你写得很到位，字字珠玑，否则有流水账之嫌。建议大家多精练句式和逻辑思维。句式不一定要很复杂，如很多从句之类的，这里指的是地道的英语表达方法; 文章中最好简单句兼插从句。精练句式有助于咱们提高写作水平和质量，不在乎写得多少，只求写得精及准确与否;逻辑思维可帮助我们很快的展开论据支持论点，有条有理，读者读着心情也舒畅。

　　搞定新托福写作五步骤分享

第一、巩固语法。

建议看赖世雄的“托福高分语法”;此书不长，可在10天年看完一遍。此书的功效是可让菜鸟在10天内领会必要的托福写作文法及阅读中遇到的文法问题，如长句子的分析。看完此书，你会认为自己的英语水平提高了一个阶梯，不仅仅是作文方面。

第二、加强单词的熟悉程度。

建议用王玉梅的单词表(excel版)，其实，每个不同的单词表版本都不完美，比如大家背单词的进程不一样，对同一个单词的理解能力及熟悉程度不一致。建议自我完善下载下来的单词表。另外，有人认为，背完单词也就完了，该复习其他部分了，可以完全不用再背了。其实，偶不同意这个观点，根据人的遗忘规律，当时记得再牢的词语，过一段时间都会忘掉一些。复习IBT不是一天、两天或几个星期能搞得定的(除非牛人)，大家需要从一开始背单词一直支持到考试前一天，就算到后来一天看一点，也比不看强。

关于此表的用法：偶按照杨鹏记忆法的规定把王玉梅的词汇表分为21个lists，就在表里最前面一列。大家可以根据杨鹏记忆法结合玉梅词汇表操练。偶背了不到半个月已经背完，而且不易忘，非常有效!

前两点是基础。如果具备这两点的朋友，你们可以进入第二阶段的练习——熟悉范文。

第三、建议看高分范文。

有些人在看范文的时候太过于注重好词好句，反而忽略了ETS对学生最主要、最重要的要求就是文章结构及论点和论据好坏与否。ETS的考官不在乎你的观点是反对呢还是赞成，或prefer哪一个观点，他们所在乎的是你的文章结构清楚与否，包括观点是否明确，对比是否宣明;在乎你的论点是否支持你的观点，论据是否有力。

偶在此最主要的就是谈论文章结构及如何写好论点，展开论据。

第四、要观点明确　逻辑性强

基于T 友们具有了丰富的词汇和语法的基础，写句子已经不是什么难事。但是，如何写好观点明确、逻辑性强及对比宣明的好文章，一是和个人知识及想象力的多少有关，例如，It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 你家附近将要建一个电影院。你同意还是反对，详细阐述支持你看法的原因。

有些基础知识欠缺或者想象力不丰富的朋友，只会想到——1，反对，为啥?太吵，人多;2，另一些人支持这个观点，为啥支持?方便，近。他们在几分钟能想到也就这么多了。如何提高想象能力呢?在短时间内我们也无法提高很多，但是我们可以用一些常规的思维去思考——连锁想象法。例如，如果反对此观点，电影院能让我们想到什么不好的地方?从修建开始想——破坏绿化，如果它建在咱们附近原来是草坪的地方呢?在施工的时候有很多噪音、污染环境等等问题;从建好后想——人来人往，太嘈杂，刚开张时，说不定有什么庆祝活动，人群拥挤，影响舍区的安静，还有很多很多大家都可以用这种连锁法想到。如果赞成的，方便，只需走路就可以看电影了;从走路又想到，节约路费及想到如果在上下班高峰期看电影的话，就可以避开人多的公共交通工具了。。。另外，有了电影院，除了可以看电影帮助消费者，另外可以有打工的机会，如卖票，小吃部工作——帮助学生补贴boards。这些观点不外乎就是关于环境、社会关系、交通、学生、经济等等。

第五、熟记范文

在每次练习写作文前，看几篇和你想写的命题相关的范文，记一些例子和句式;另外，注意看范文里论点和论据是如何展开，以及写作思维，对比一下你自己的写作思维。在写的时候一定要卡时间，超过30分钟就不要写了，反过来再看范文，对比一下。如果你没有写完，没有关系，总结经验最重要，分析一下为什么没有写完，是因为单词拼写耽误时间了，还是想不出来论点如何展开。多数人犯的是第二个问题，这个一是需要时间练习，二可以根据偶提供的办法解决。

大家在审完题后(花2分钟想一下2-3个论点)，把想到的论点在电脑上列个提纲。先把第一段，最后一段写完，及第二、三或四段的首句写完——首句就是论点，每段的body都是围绕这几个点来。如此，既防止写不完的情况发生，又不会写偏题——因为你在写首句的时候已经检查了和主题一致与否。把整个框架打好(在此申明，这个不是模板，模板太死板，虽然有它的好处，但是模板不能fit每个不同的命题)，再来想论据去支持论点。这一点就看个人的功底了。如果字数够了，没有犯过大的语法错误，无论文章内容丰富与否，至少不会低于20分了。

字数最好控制在320-450之间，太多或低于300都不好。太多的话，除非你写得很到位，字字珠玑，否则有流水账之嫌。建议大家多精练句式和逻辑思维。句式不一定要很复杂，如很多从句之类的，这里指的是地道的英语表达方法; 文章中最好简单句兼插从句。精练句式有助于咱们提高写作水平和质量，不在乎写得多少，只求写得精及准确与否;逻辑思维可帮助我们很快的展开论据支持论点，有条有理，读者读着心情也舒畅。

　　托福独立写作范文：每周长时间工作3天胜过短时间5天

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: working three days a week with longer hours is better than working five days a week with shorter hours.

People nowadays are becoming more restless in daily work and life, in which the rhythm is in quite an amazing shift towards being faster. From my point of view, I would rather schedule fewer days of work rather than evenly distributed hours into more days.

Working three days in a week means that people will have four days off in a week, which leads to a more possibly flexible schedule. This will create a clear distinction between work and life. Not only do people have enough time to do house work, hang out with friends and read a book, but also they could plan a short trip somewhere nearby, which seems always to be in a rush in a five-day work circle. I work as an English course designer now. My supervisor permits that I can come to the office three days a week with the flexibility of arranging working days on my own. When I don’t come in, I usually visit exhibitions and art galleries, take my girl on a date, attend a reading session, and sometimes just simply camp in a mountain nearby Beijing. Apparently I am not having too much desire for an exhausting Friday drink or an anxiety when Sunday night comes. Now I have more accomplishments besides work such as improving my Spanish and Bulgarian and dwelling in a library enjoying researching academics.

Obviously, there is one implication to work fewer days: work longer hours each day. I am not hesitating to take this option still. I always need time to get into my role. When all these ideas come to me, I also don’t want to simply stop and leave the work to the next day. This is somewhat called “marginal time”, which means the time spent simply from switching from one mental status to another, for instance from that of working to that of lying down, takes certain amount of minutes to adjust to. Longer hours’ working usually can reduce this unecessary waste of time. I can go pretty far in my projects in a day if counting the long duration from early morning to late night without stopping. Some of my friends even see “work hard and play harder” as their motto. This is so true. Seeing one day’s workflow going fast is truly a pleasure, which always motivates the next progress to happen. I remember one time when my team and I went through an entire day’s brainstorm and received a huge burst of work until mid-night.

And there is one thing adding up to this. I take work as a path to an enjoyment of life. I would totally enjoy a short yet a little painfully intense work, enjoying at the moment of working, and enjoying afterwards as well.

(459 words, Ge Xu)